Despite my reference at one point that certain authors would have done well
to learn from the phrase “Brevity is the soul of wit,”
I have not myself excised much excess from this reflection.
Hopefully I will take my own advice in the future.
It is possible to know so much about a subject that you become totally ignorant.
— Mentat Text Turo (dicto), Chapterhouse: Dune
(good advice for any academic)
I first encountered the Dune
universe in middle school when my father
took my brother and me to see
I was twelve or thirteen years old and adored it.
I came home and told my mother that “it was better than Star Wars!”
— and I meant it.
I checked out Herbert’s novel from the local library
and set about reading it in my manner, plowing through the book and enjoying it
despite understanding little of it.
I didn’t realize how little I understood, but I found it engrossing.
A future high school friend of mine first met me in those days,
at All-City Band. He would later remind me that
I didn’t really talk to anyone during breaks;
I would simply reach under the chair, where I had lain the book,
and pull it out to steal another page or two while waiting for practice
I subsequently made my way slowly through all six of Herbert’s books.
Another high school friend who shared my love of the books espied me
reading the sixth and advised,
“You’ll regret reading that.”
“Why’s that?” I asked.
“You’ll get to the end,” he said,
“you’ll turn the last page, and you’ll scream,
‘No!’ as you realize that he’s set up for a great sequel,
which he can’t write because he’s dead.”
I did not heed my friend. I read the book, turned the last page,
saw a blank page, and exclaimed, “No!” as I realized that
Herbert had set up for a great conclusion, which he can’t write
because he’s dead.
But my friend was wrong, because I don’t regret reading it.
Re-reading Dune and its sequels
The summer between my two years of seminary, I decided to re-read Dune
It had been little more than a decade since my previous experience.
The pastor of the parish where I was interning noticed and asked me
if I had read the famous dinner scene.
“I read that it took him several years to write that scene,”
he remarked, “but it really shows when you read it.”
I don’t know if that’s true, in part because my memory says that he
cited something like 14 years, perhaps 7.
Either way, I later learned that Herbert didn’t take that long
to write the entire novel, never mind the scene.
Perhaps his memory deceived him the way mine does,
but let’s assume that Herbert did indeed work on that scene
longer than any other. It shows.
In a novel where just about every word seems perfectly crafted,
that chapter excels in subtle exposition.
I made it no farther through the series at the time; I don’t recall why.
Seminary kept me fairly busy, and I grew increasingly discouraged that fall,
and that probably distracted me from my distraction, which was a shame.
I did read other science fiction books that year, so perhaps
I couldn’t secure the later books from a library.
Either way, I didn’t try again for more than 20 years.
When I read Dune
the third time, this time as a middle-aged man,
I understood it much more deeply.
I know not whether it was my naïveté or my half-wittedness,
or perhaps my having read it through the lens of Lynch’s work,
but as a middle-schooler I had really misunderstood a few things.
My main misconception was in not realizing that
Paul Atreides is not in fact a divine being,
as Lynch implies; he is, instead, a man with highly trained and carefully
honed intellect and physique, with the further advantage of a weapon
that no man is supposed to know — only women.
In other words, I finally caught up with
observation made by Herbert himself
I have my quibbles about the film, of course.
Paul was a man playing god, not a god who could make it rain.
Paul’s mind has been trained in the ways of the mentats
In the Dune
universe, thinking machines are forbidden,
on account of a so-called Butlerian Jihad
many centuries prior
(perhaps millennia prior; it matters not).
Instead, a school of humans called mentats
trains to use the human mind,
enhanced by a drug called sappho
, if memory serves, to use both deduction
but also intuition to make highly sophisticated decisions quickly.
Once men turned their thinking over to machines in the hope
that this would set them free.
But that only permitted other men with machines to enslave them.
— Reverend Gaius Helen Mohiam, Dune
(This is a great line to read and reflect on
when you’re enrolled in a class on Artificial Intelligence.)
Paul’s body has likewise been trained according to the best techniques
of his age. However, his mother has also trained him in certain techniques
of a female order called the Bene Gesserit
, of whom I’ll write
The Weirding Way is a martial art,
while Voice is a method of modulating one’s voice
so as to compel one’s listeners to execute the speaker’s will.
Over the course of the novel, Paul uses:
- Voice to help him survive treachery
that causes the fall of House Atreides;
- mentat skills to “see” where a sandstorm’s winds are safer
and navigate an ornithopter thorugh it when any other man would certainly die;
- the Weirding Way to win a critical hand-to-hand combat
that launches him on the road to leading an uprising
of Dune’s native Fremen;
…and combines these skills to successfully lead that uprising
to overthrow his father’s enemies and avenge his death.
Yet this “Messiah” experiences multiple tragedies,
and fails in his main goal: preventing the Fremen Jihad,
which spells the deaths of billions of lives
(and is confirmed in the sequel).
This latter failure is what surprised me most about my third reading
of the novel.
Somehow, in my previous readings I had not noticed Herbert’s repeated
allusions to Paul’s desire to prevent
and his attempt to direct the uprising
through the very narrow gates of probability
that would emerge into a peaceful reign.
This, I think, is one of my favorite parts of the novel after my third reading,
and it’s certainly not something you’ll get from Lynch’s film,
which is still not a bad thing in my opinion —
though when I viewed it again last year, I understood why it failed.
I no longer think it’s better than Star Wars
though Herbert’s novel certainly is.
The Kwisatz Haderach
While the Bene Gesserit have no religion,
they are not above using the religious impulse to their own ends.
One of their branches, the Missionaria Protectiva
has seeded more primitive planets with myths
so that a member of the order who finds herself unexpectedly among them
can manipulate the local populace.
Dune is one such planet,
and the Missionaria Protectiva seeded Dune’s Fremen tribes
with the myth of a messiah, the Kwisatz Haderach
Paul’s mother, Jessica, herself trained by the Bene Gesserit,
finds herself and Paul in such a situation,
and comes to realize that the Fremen have been so brainwashed.
How I missed this as well on my first two readings baffles me.
Jessica exploits this myth to help Paul and herself
survive among the initially hostile Fremen.
This is not a “get out of jail free” card;
among other trials, Paul undergoes the Water of Life
which like the Gom Jabbar
is a Bene Gesserit device
that only women have previously survived;
it will enhance his intellectual and physical gifts and training even further,
making him a fearsome force.
Indeed, the Bene Gesserit had a breeding program that was supposed to produce
a Kwisatz Haderach, and Paul was part of this breeding program
— but out of love for Paul’s father,
Lady Jessica disobeyed her superiors and gave her consort a son.
(Apparently the Bene Gesserit gifts of self-control extend to determining
which sperm cell fertilizes the egg.)
Paul’s training helps him survive the ordeal, though only barely;
he spends many days unconscious and is nearly killed and rendered for his water.
(The novel is set in a desert, after all.)
Overcoming this ordeal helps elevate him to the status of a god
in Fremen eyes — though as the sequels show, their view of god
is quite different from ours.
I hardly remember the sequels from my first time through them.
I reread them after my recent, third reading of Dune
so most of what follows consists of my memories
from the second trip through the sequels.
Dune Messiah and Children of Dune
The first sequel considers the later years of Paul’s short reign,
followed by his sister’s regency during his children’s minority.
Both have subplots that involve treachery,
but Dune Messiah
’s subplot of treachery is more interesting
if only because it begins to introduce the Tleilaxu.
Children of Dune
’s subplot, however,
is rather unimaginative and seems like standard sci-fi fare.
If Herbert intended to go somewhere with it,
he seems to have changed his mind and held on to it as a plot device.
’s biggest strength lies in its subversion of
the prescience that Paul’s mentat abilities, abetted by the Water of Life,
have given him.
Prescience might seem an enviable gift,
but already in Dune
Herbert shows that Paul’s foreseeing
the Fremen Jihad rather increases his stress and eventual tragedy.
In Dune Messiah
and Children of Dune
prescience becomes more of a curse:
it is not so much knowledge of the future
as of the future’s possibilities
including the consequences of each
, both good and
Nor is it a perfect knowledge,
but rather “the ability to see farther than others, like one who stands
atop a sand dune while others are still below.” (Not an exact quote.)
The two books also introduce a device I do not care for,
the idea of genetic memory, that our memories are embedded
in our genetic material,
and that, under the right circumstances, we can unlock them.
It is an important device throughout the novels, and Herbert uses it well;
I just find it a step too far — more than a step, really,
the one place in the novels where I had to work hard to suspend disbelief.
(Note in 2023: The previous paragraph is slightly wrong:
the notion of genetic memory appears already in the first novel,
but is not nearly as prominent as in the sequels, where it becomes a fulcrum.)
Children of Dune
wraps up the first three books in a tidy trilogy.
Paul Atreides is dead (yes, really); his son, Leto II, sits on the throne.
In addition to Paul’s enhanced faculties,
Leto has merged with Dune’s sandworm into a hybrid
that possesses indefinite lifespan and superior strength.
His sister has married his primary rival to the throne,
ensuring a peace and stability that will last for millennia.
I don’t speak. I operate a machine called language.
It creaks and groans, but is mine own.
— Dune Messiah
Several nations or races of the Dune
universe push the boundaries
of what is forbidden after the Butlerian Jihad.
specialize in mechanical and computational technology,
while the Tleilaxu
specialize in biological engineering.
The novels hardly acquaint us with any Ixians,
but the Tleilaxu feature prominently from Dune Messiah
While their products are highly sought after,
they typically include a certain revulsion
which other humans then extend to their race,
often calling them the dirty Tleilaxu
One of the Tleilaxu’s most prized inventions is the ghola
something akin to a clone.
The Tleilaxu re-manufacture both for Paul
in Dune Messiah
and for Leto II in God Emperor of Dune
(and in every subsequent novel besides) a beloved servant of the Atreides
who played a small but important role in Dune
At the beginning of Dune Messiah
, the Tleilaxu do not yet have the means
to “restore” a ghola’s memories,
but a significant fulcrum of the plot involves their attempt
to combine treachery an an experiment to do this.
Another Tleilaxu “product”
are the wonderfully named Face Dancers
, who disguise themselves
by changing their physical appearance.
This makes them natural tools for treachery.Two drawbacks to Face Dancers are lack of independence and sterility, but
Herbert generally portrays their Tleilaxu masters as stupid bunglers and
would-be traitors whose only true competence
lies in their biotechnical expertise.
God Emperor of Dune
Much like Dune Messiah
, God Emperor
focuses on the last few months
of Leto II’s reign.
Most readers find this novel the hardest to complete,
and my younger self was no exception.
My older self didn’t find it quite that hard,
but while I appreciated it more, I’m still not sure it pulls off
whatever Herbert wanted.
One reason I enjoyed this much more as an adult is that
I have experienced forty-plus years of politics and bureaucracy,
and Herbert, throught Leto, makes many dry observations of both.
The novel also contains character development of a sort,
though less of human
characters and more of organizations
The Tleilaxu and the Bene Gesserit take front stage,
and we learn a little more about Ix.
As mentioned already, an “average” Tleilaxu operation
is generally comical in its ineptitude.
In God Emperor
, the Tleilaxu manage to use Face Dancers
in an “above average” attempt to assassinate the God Emperor.
By “above average” I do not mean that it was particularly successful
— it was not —
but that it initially provides Leto with some entertainment:
his prescience did not foresee the attempt, so it amuses him.
However, it eventually angers Leto; being more worm than human (his words!),
he is in love, and the attempt endangered his beloved’s life.
“I will arrange a performance in the plaza tomorrow,” Leto said.
“It will be a performance of the surviving Face Dancers.”
Leto thought the Face Dancers performed well despite their obvious terror.
— God Emperor of Dune
The Bene Gesserit, meanwhile, seem to have grown wiser over the millennia
of Leto’s reign, and even manage to win his favor by warning him
of one such Tleilaxu plot.
From this point on, the Bene Gesserit change
tagonists to pro
though not perhaps the series heroines.
On my second reading, I noticed a few flairs in God Emperor
that I doubt I caught the first time.
One I haven’t seen mentioned elsewhere is illustrated
by Leto’s vocabulary:
he refers to his line of gholas as “the Duncans”,
and to individuals as “the Duncan”.
The Dune universe doesn’t see gholas as truly human,
so they don’t attain to a full human dignity:
they are products to be manufactured, bought, used, and discarded.
Heretics of Dune
re-introduces multi-layered plots to the Dune
but abandons several threads without satisfactory resolution.
Set thousands of years after God Emperor
which itself was set thousands of years after Children of Dune
it introduces more fascinating inventions of Ix and Bene Tleilax:
no-ships, chairdogs, and shigawire.
Language has also changed over time:
the Atreides are now the Odrade, or at least some of them are;
planet Arrakis is now Rakis; and so forth.
Gone also is any hint of an empire or even of feudal houses;
the only powers worth mentioning are
the Guild, the Bene Gesserit, the Bene Tleilax, Ix, and a new enemy,
Most of the novel follows the Bene Gesserit’s point of view.
For some reason that never becomes clear,
they have been purchasing Yet More Duncan Idaho GholaTM
from the Tleilaxu, one at a time,
and training them from childhood until they fail for some reason.
The current Duncan doesn’t look to last much longer.
On the planet Dune, once officially Arrakis, now Rakis,
the cult of the God Emperor persists.
Leto’s death brought back the sandworms, that source of the spice
the regent’s poor choices on climate manipulation had doomed to extinction
in Children of Dune
. This cult demands the worship of sandworms,
but is otherwise even more incompetent than the Tleilaxu,
and in fact ends up subverted by them.
Several threads of an intricate and interesting
lead us to several worlds, a first for the Dune series,
where no previous novel saw any serious
action on more than two worlds.
Many of the worlds we return to exhibit the effects of decisions
from previous millennia.
In a curious twist, a Jewish people persists in one novel,
and their precautions against potential persecution constitute a clever crux
of the novel.
The novel ends with multiple catastrophes, setting up for the sequel.
The Tleilaxu, again
The novel opens with one of the most intriguing beginnings of the series,
if not the
most intriguing beginning: we finally glimpse
the Tleilaxu Masters unmasked.
They have plotted to rule the galaxy for millennia,
and their previous stupidity as a feint.
Now will their true plans move into action!
Ghola technology made this possible: the Masters reproduced themselves
and thus were able to acquire wisdom as well as knowledge,
devising the perfect plan.
…except that they are deluding themselves.
The plan doesn’t fail
so much as wither away
because the much-reincarnated Tleilaxu Masters did not in fact
gain the intelligence they expected.
…or did they?
Like the authors of the Sci-Fi Channel’s re-imagining of Battlestar Galactica
to me as a reader it felt
Herbert intended to take the book in a different direction,
couldn’t figure out a satisfying way to make it work,
and abandoned it.
As I say, their plot sort of withers
If he did have a satisfactory resolution, it somehow never came into being.
Maybe that was supposed to be part of the seventh novel,
but considering the catastrophes that occur at Heretics of Dune
end, I can’t possibly see how.
Perhaps the point was simply that the Tleilaxu were deluding themselves,
but it is by now perfectly clear that if Herbert had some coherent idea here,
I am too thick to have picked up on it.
The Honored Matres
Heretics of Dune
introduces a new enemy, the Honored Matres
An organization much like the Bene Gesserit,
they reverse what the Bene Gesserit consider virtues
(self-control, patience, ruling from the shadows, etc.)
and embrace the corresponding vices.
They rule directly rather than from the shadows;
they use sex to control rather than to direct evolution;
they rule their order by tyranny rather than consensus;
they have no patience, no sense of long-term strategy.
No one is sure of the Honored Matres’ origin, but it occurred during
a human diaspora that followed the death of Leto II.
Humanity dispersed beyond the control of existing power structures
with the help of Ixian ships that mitigated the need for Guild Navigators.
Somewhere in that diaspora, the Honored Matres were born,
and as they returned, they drove terrified refugees before them.
An important question is whether
they return merely out of a lust for power,
or whether they themselves are fleeing an Enemy
they discovered and disturbed.
Those who would repeat the past must control the teaching of history.
— Bene Gesserit Coda, Chapterhouse: Dune
While not as action-oriented as Heretics
mixes God Emperor
reflections on bureaucracy and human fallibility
with significantly more plot.
Herbert places a lot of frustration with bureaucracy and disgust with politics
on the lips of the Bene Gesserit.
We tend to become like the worst in those we oppose.
—Bene Gesserit Coda, Chapterhouse: Dune
You will notice that I find it rather quotable,
and routinely wrote down one appealing nugget after another.
Show me a completely smooth operation
and I'll show you someone who's covering mistakes. Real boats rock.
Bene Gesserit watchdog, Chapterhouse: Dune
I so enjoy quoting the novel that I’m not sure I care to write
much about the rest of it, but I’ll try.
After the catastrophe that ends Heretics of Dune
Darwi Odrade has risen to lead the Bene Gesserit.
The novel is told almost entirely from their point of view, as I recall;
it’s certainly the only point of view I remember.
(I count the male protagonists as Bene Gesserit. The reader would understand.)
Odrade has to build on her predecessor’s work to maintain
a fragile alliance against the Honored Matres,
who have now erupted into the galaxy and
seek to destroy the Bene Gesserit homeworld, Chapterhouse.
However, the Honored Matres seek not only power:
they do indeed fear someone or something,
an Enemy that pursues them from the diaspora,
and one reason for their return is to reacquire knowledge that could assist them
against that enemy, against whom they have yet to inflict a significant defeat.
The Bene Gesserit having been attempting to grow sandworms on Chapterhouse,
and to that end have transformed most of their world into a desert.
They reflect on how it is often necessary to sacrifice things that are good
to obtain something greater, and the effects it has on those who trust us.
Moral decisions are always easy to recognize.
They are where you abandon self-interest.
— Darwi Odrade, "Chapterhouse: Dune"
Summaries of the novel typically state that it ends with a cliffhanger,
but that’s not correct.
A “cliffhanger” occurs
when the resolution
of an episode of immediate importance goes unresolved
ends with no such unresolved dilemma,
and with no surprising revelation that demands further investigation.
Rather, it ends with several significant and unresolved plot threads
the last of the Tleilaxu and his gholas; the mysterious Marty and Daniel;
the Bene Gesserit schism; the stolen no-ship; the Chapterhouse sandworms.
None of these difficulties demands immediate resolution,
but leaving the story here certainly leaves the reader unsatisfied.
The nerve Herbert had, to die after writing it!
Religion in Dune
Many reviewers praise Dune
for its use of religion.
I’ll grant that what Herbert executes, he executes well,
but religion is actually one of Dune’s weaker aspects.
With rare exception, its notion of divinity is indistinguishable from supermen,
much like the heroes of Greek mythology, dropped into a pseudo-scientific context.
I think Herbert himself came to see this weakness later on,
and attempted to redress it, as I explain below.
A digression due to Cardinal George
The notion of religion in Dune
reminds me of a speech
once gave at Mundelein Seminary.
In it, he distinguished between a seminary
and a department of religion
While the former studies and teaches religion,
you don’t have to believe in the religion to serve there —
indeed, many consider sincere faith an impediment to good scholarship on religion
the absence of faith, even better.
Cardinal George pointed out that this is antithetical
to the purpose of a seminary,
which is not to teach about
religion in a sterile fashion, but,
from the word’s roots, to nourish through a seed of faith
(“seminare” = “to seed”) that already exists.
Students’ and faculty’s lived experience of God
necessarily excludes a certain sterile, skeptical point of view,
but likewise opens up completely different opportunities
impossible to pursue at a department of religion.
The seminary’s duty is not merely to teach
but to form
the seminarian isn’t there merely to learn
but to be formed
This is why a Catholic seminary includes daily Mass,
communal prayer several times a day,
being “set apart” from the world, pastoral assignments,
and so forth.
How this relates to Dune
Herbert’s use of religion in most of the novels is impressive
from a department of religion’s point of view.
Is there superstition? yes. Cynical manipulation? yes.
Vague spiritualism in place of doctrine and devotion? yes.
But faith? true
The major terms expressed by most of Dune’s characters
are an amalgamation of terms taken from south Asian religions.
A number of adherents are Zensunni:
“Zen” from Buddhism, “Sunni” from Islam.
we learn that the Tleilaxu hold to a version of Islam so extreme
that I believe even the most extremist Muslims would find it repugnant.
Herbert seems to have had a particular fascination with Islam;
later reading had made me aware of Islamic terms
that are used by the Fremen, like “Fedaykin”.
Herbert seems to have avoided Christian terminology.
The closest reference I recall to any sort of Christianity lies in
“the Orange Catholic Bible”, a term with double meanings:
- It is the result of an ecumenical gathering of all human religions,
who agreed to end religious disagreements and warfare by assembling
a book that contains all their spiritual wisdom.
(“Spiritual” but not “religious”.
Here the idea of “catholic” as in “universal” appears:
that which appeals to everyone.)
- “Orange” balances “Catholic” by referring to
Northern Irish Protestants, who at the time of Herbert’s writing
were in conflict with Northern Irish Catholics.
The Bene Gesserit are intriguing as an all-female society
with religious overtones, including the aforementioned Missionaria
, but they have no religious faith and are in many other ways
the very opposite of a Catholic religious order.
Where a Catholic religious order prizes virginity and chastity,
and many of them withdraw from the world to live in a religious society
parallel to mainstream human cultures,
the Bene Gesserit are experts in the arts of seduction
and manipulation of breeding lines,
and embed themselves within the world to manipulate it.
The Honored Matres are not so much an “opposite”
of the Bene Gesserit but a reduction ad absurdum
of their principles
when one renounces discipline.
This is one reason I found both the Jews and the Tleilaxu
so compelling: in Heretics of Dune
they had the appearances of a genuine faith
as opposed to a deified nationalism, superstition, or rationalized powerlust.
Alas, Herbert’s desire to explore this seems to have been minimal
— or perhaps that was a goal of the final novel he never wrote.
The son’s sequels
Many years after Herbert’s death, his son Brian announced the discovery
of some notes his father had written towards a seventh novel,
including a plot outline.
He set about writing this novel with Kevin J. Anderson,
a more established science fiction author.
They first wrote a significant number of prequels
to try and clarify characters and events that would appear or be referenced
in the sequels, though they claimed the sequels could be understood
without reading the prequels.
In addition, they claimed that once they started writing the sequels,
it became clear to them that one book would not be enough to contain the ideas,
so they wrote two: Hunters of Dune
and Sandworms of Dune
The one good thing about the sequels is the preface to book 7,
where Anderson and the younger Herbert acknowledge the elder Herbert’s
genius, and acknowledge frankly that they aren’t up to the task
of replicating Herbert’s voice.
I hereby pause to recognize that admirable humility.
Their admission of inadequacy cushions the disappointment from page one.
It becomes immediately apparent that you have moved out of the high-quality,
highly polished writing craft of the first six novels,
with at least two arguably deserving of a place
among the greatest works of fiction.
Oriana Fallaci once said that the key to good writing was to revise, to revise,
to revise; Shakespeare observed that “brevity is the soul of wit,”
and I believe
(correctly, it turns out!
that Blaise Pascal apologized to a correspondent for the length of a letter,
for “I haven’t had the time to make it shorter.”
The elder Herbert clearly expended effort refining his writing;
it becomes painfully clear that Anderson and the younger Herbert
had no interest in that.
The transition from Chapterhouse: Dune
to Hunters of Dune
is much like following up a high-quality cinematic film
with a Saturday morning cartoon.
Yes, it’s really that bad.
The admission of inadequacy occurs at the same time
as possibly the most impressive work of fiction in the Dune universe:
the claim Herbert and Anderson make that
they will follow the elder Herbert’s general outline.
This grows increasingly incredible as the novels proceed,
if only because the sequels’ plot is about at sophisticated
as the writing that attempts to elaborate it.
It basically falls apart at the end of the first novel.
which concludes with an unbelievable “big reveal”.
Suppose, for the sake of argument,
that the description Daniel and Marty give of themselves
in Chapterhouse: Dune
was in fact a poorly executed misdirection
on Herbert’s part:
“That would’ve been funny.
[The Tleilaxu Masters] have such a hard time accepting that Face Dancers
can be independent of them.”
“I don’t see why. It’s a natural consequence.
They gave us the power to absorb the memories and experiences of other people.
Gather enough of those and…“
“It’s personas we take, Marty.”
Further suppose that Herbert and Anderson
really are filling in an outline the elder Herbert had sketched,
that he really planned to introduce the characters Omnius and Erasmus,
who as it turns out are resurrected from an earlier age,
of whom there has been no hint at all throughout the first six novels,
not even in Heretics
If so, it would count among the least satisfying misdirection I can imagine,
much worse than those films that have one too many twist endings.
It’s essentially the very opposite of Herbert’s very brand.
It doesn’t stand to reason.
Again, we have to admit this merely for the sake of argument,
because even if we admit that Herbert committed this to a plot outline,
there’s no reason not to think that Herbert had a few thoughts,
sketched them out before or during the writing of Chapterhouse: Dune
then changed his mind by the conclusion.
The notes were just that: Notes. Thoughts. Ideas. Nothing more.
I have on several occasions written longer-form stories.
I haven’t attempted to publish any since college, but
I have on some of those occasions sketched out some ideas, at least in my head,
but also on paper (or computer).
They almost never turn out the way I first wrote, because I revise them
find weaknesses and contradictions that need fixing, rethink the flow
and what the reader can take at a certain time, and so forth.
Let’s grant this very questionable assumption
that the great reveal at the end of Hunters of Dune
is indeed what the elder Herbert committed to writing at one point.
I can’t imagine how he would have seen that idea through to execution;
it contradicts too much of what came before.
The difference between an independent Face Dancer
and a resurrected Artificial Intelligence is no small matter.
My advice to the potential reader is to read the first six novels…
It is indeed disappointing to finish the sixth novel
and to realize that Frank Herbert is dead.
It is worth reading the novel more than once;
there’s just so much to like.
Heretics of Dune
and Chapterhouse: Dune
could well have stood
with the unwritten seventh novel as their own story, even had the first four
novels never been written.
I don’t exactly regret reading Brian Herbert’s sequels, but at the end,
I could easily conclude that they weren’t worth the effort.
I can’s say that about the original series.